Friday, April 24, 2009
girl
a teenage girl is sitting on the steps of a brownstone holding a cell phone and a yellow balloon smocking a cigarette. a garbage track comes by. she gets up. she throws the cell phone and the yellow balloon in the track and walks away. she keeps walking down the street. you stand and keep watching her until you can’t see her anymore.
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5 comments:
I feel like these should be illustrated. They're so great =)
no, it's your poems that need to be illustrated:)
you never know what people are going to like or relate. i had you in mind posting the stuff on your bday, thinking you'd certainly want to say something on that subject, yet, you did not:)
i take my comment back - things can be delayed but i can never be wrong;)
a) i did post
b) sometimes i dont go on for a few days and then read a bunch at once
c) sometimes i need to think about something and then come back and post
d) yes things can be delayed
e) everybody can be wrong
f) except me
g) if i dont reply doesn't mean i didn't like the post LOL; sometimes it's hard to put responses into words
a - yes, i know
b - yes, i know
c - sure
d - yes
e - yes
f - no, except me
g - who said anything about liking?
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